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5 unacceptable names for baby and 1 which was just perfect

They lay in bed, staring up at the ceiling. The Baby had been asleep in his crib for nearly two hours.

"What do you think of Mark?" John asked.

"No. It somehow reminds me of Mycroft."

"How? Mark has nothing to do with Mycroft!"

"The first letter is the same." Sherlock eyed him in the gloom. "It's enough."

John rolled his eyes. "What about Martin--No. First letter, right."

"Yes. And I don't want our child to grow up obsessed with aeroplanes. So Martin is out. As are Douglas and Arthur."

John giggled. Sherlock was impossible.

"Steven?" the good doctor asked, after few minutes filled with quiet snoring from the crib.

"Name me a Steven who isn't a troll! Come on, John, use your imagination!"

"Hey! I'm trying to! I've given you at least twenty names in the last two--"

He was cut short by a wail. Oh, so it was already two hours and twenty-one minutes? The Baby worked like a Swiss watch. John watched Sherlock--thank God it was his turn--with a smile. Sherlock was good at this. Hell, he was good at anything he put his gigantic mind to.

"There, there, my little cucumber patch, daddy is here..."

"Benedict," John snapped.

Sherlock smiled, long fingers teasing out a halo of blond curls.

"So he is... Benedict."
KID FIC! YAAAAY!

Beta was once again amazing [link]

So I've made it to contest 221b. 221 words and the last one must have 'b' a s a first letter.

I hope you like it!


HOLY COW!
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:iconpie-inthe-sky:
Pie-InThe-Sky Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS WHAT NO I
JUST
THE ACTORS NAMES AND
THIS IS PERFECT
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Tokiogirl21 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Name me a Steven who isn't a troll!" XD love that line
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Kateboat Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

ghsh

 

i

 

i just I CAN'TTTTT

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Iamjohnlocked8646 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh gosh so cuteeeee!
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconraynyuki:
RaynYuki Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh gosh! so cute! adorable!
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:iconberrycakebee:
BerryCakeBee Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Omygawd! I'm dying!! This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo adorable!! Can't stop smiling from ear to ear...!! :iconlovelyplz: -> "There, there, my little cucumber patch, daddy is here..." best Sherlock fanfiction quote EVER Ohmaiii Q3Q ... A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E.
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IloveVaffles Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Awwww.... Jakie cudne. Malutki Benedict <3
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:iconkalinka87:
kalinka87 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
słodkie/ przesłodkie :):) bobas z blond loczkami :) łyknęłam wszystkie Twoje fanficy po kolei. Są cudowne :)
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dziękuję! Cieszę się, że się spodobało!
O! A jak oceniasz pozostałe?
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:iconkalinka87:
kalinka87 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dla mnie osobiście mogłyby być bardziej pikantne;)ale to oczywiście kwestia gustu. Podobało mi się również opowiadanie "Decyzje. Nie będę ukrywać, że ze względu na pocałunek. Podoba mi się zwięzłość, treściwość i konkret w opisie:)ale więcej pikanterii i czasem większego rozpłynięcia się w opisie :) (p.s - oczywiście to są moje mega mega subiektywne uwagi, także nie musisz ich brać zupełnie pod uwagę :):)) pozdrawiam!
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nie będą bardziej pikantniejsze (zresztą, Błędy są dość pikantne!). Zapowiadam to wszędzie, że publicznego lemona nie będzie ;).
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:iconduod:
DuoD Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
And yet, and yet...
[link]
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
To erotyk, nie lemon.
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:iconduod:
DuoD Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student General Artist
You keep saying that, I don't know why...
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Bo ja jestem ponad to :P
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:iconkalinka87:
kalinka87 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
szkoda;D niemniej jednak, czytało mi się twoje fanficy z przyjemnością :)
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...Nie będzie pikanterii, nie będzie więcej czytania XD?
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:iconkalinka87:
kalinka87 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no, aż tak tej pikanterii nie jestem spragniona :) czytanie będzie, jak będzie pisanie, za które ogromnie trzymam kciuki (za wenę/ pomysły i słowo) :)
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dzisiaj coś wrzuciłam!
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:iconkalinka87:
kalinka87 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
* nie lubię poprawiać, ale * bardziej pikantne, albo *pikantniejsze :)
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Dzierzba Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist
A kto rodził to dziecko? John czy Sherlock?
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A tak poważnie - kuzynka Sherlocka, John jest ojcem biologicznym.
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:iconduod:
DuoD Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Czyżby miała na imię "Mycroftylda"?
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Widziałyśmy dzisiaj jej zdjęcie
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:icondzierzba:
Dzierzba Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist
i wszystko stało się jasne^^
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:iconduod:
DuoD Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Mycroft. Dlatego był taki grubiutki, dorabia jako surogatka.
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
MOLLY
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:icondeatte:
deatte Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
moj absolutny faworyt
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
AWWW!
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sokolik17 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
o boziu! to jest cudne, Benedict ;D
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Miał być Benjamin - picie do jednego fica ;)
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:iconsokolik17:
sokolik17 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Benedict też świetnie pasuje ;D
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:icondeatte:
deatte Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
az za dobrze.
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AwakenedEarth Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
when Sherlock said 'cucumber patch' I thought he was saying Cumberbatch, and what with the child being called Benedict.... I enjoyed your name referencing. =] nice fic, sweet. =]
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a-xmasmurder Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
YES. This is just YES. This 221b is made of kittens and rainbows and I can't even-

I see what you did there.
Cucumber patch.
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awww! Thank you!
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xXBladerunnerXx Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
-head explodes- the cuteness is just ASDFGHJKL <3 *FanGirlGlomp*
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:blush:
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TheBrightsider Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011
"Name me a Steven who isn't a troll! Come on, John, use your imagination!"

MOFFAT.

cucumber patch.
iseewhatyoudidthar.

(I like it :3)
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Moffat indeed ;).

Thanks! I'm happy you like it :)
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:iconnemesis12:
Nemesis12 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
N'awww, this is cute.
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)! I'm glad you like it!
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Nemesis12 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011
You're welcome.
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Super-Skitty Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Student Writer
So. Much. Love. Cannot. Comprehend.
Referencing your actor, Cabin Pressure, Moffat and Martin Freeman... As if I couldn't love Sherlock any more. :heart: *favs a billion times*
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Luna666 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! But I'm affraid I've been referencing to Martin Crieff - character played by Benedict in 'Cabin Pressure' :).
Anyway, thank you very much! :hug:
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BleedingSilverBird Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
I love it! So much AWESOME!
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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panisowa Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
This is so sweet! Great idea with a child's name :)
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:iconluna666:
Luna666 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well it was meant to be Benjamin, but my beta add that "cucumber patch" and changed the name, thinking it should be Benedict, but I like it more with that "cucumber patch"
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